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Bloodline Name:Angel wings
Clan:Kuroki clan
Appearance: Gives user wings that vary by user. wings are often black.
History:This was the power of the first Kuroki, Kuroki Asuma. He has passed it down through the generations of the Kuroki clan. This bloodline only activates when the user is put through a life threatening experience.

What it does:The bloodline increases strength and speed by ten each when activated. This bloodline also gives the passive ability of flight. The bloodline does evolve, giving new powers the more it evolves. At first evolution, the user can drain chakra if within a certain distance of the enemy(Can absorb 10 enemy chakra at once, can be reused, but has a recharge time of 3 posts). At second evolution, the user can turn the wings into steel and fling the feathers, which become razor sharp, at an enemy. The feathers in this jutsu become sharp enough to cut steel. Furthur powers are as yet unknown. Health is also unkown, it greatly depends on the stamina and chakra of the user.
Chakra Guage Cost:Has an ap cost of ten, five with mastery. costs an additional 5 to maintain, 2 with mastery. This bloodline has a wc of 2000 to learn. Mastery must be acheived by learning to control the wings, otherwise they will pop out with every strong emotion. The wings must be able to vanish or manifest at the user's will, otherwise you have not mastered them. Mastery takes an additional 2000 words of practice.

What is the wordcount to learn....how much charka can u absor....how sharp are the second version....what's the health.

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No % give base absorbtion

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How can u master

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Give mastery a wc

Should the cd for chakra abortion be in post or should it stay at 5 mins

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And wat he said change it to post cool down make it 3

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